When I came back this afternoon, I saw that the back of my house was empty and I was very excited, and then I just heard the sound of a quarrel. Suddenly I heard my grandfather's voice, is my grandfather quarrel with who? It turned out that my grandfather cut down someone else's tree, the man has been scolding my grandfather. My grandfather didn't say anything about him, but just sat there and listened. Always understand him. I think we can cut it down, because the trees are really lush, so it's kind of in the way. The trees are almost on my roof. So my room was dark, so my grandfather cut down some of it. All they ever talk about is my grandpa. It's annoying. My grandpa said it's gonna lose money. The man kept saying why did you cut it off?
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Upon my return this afternoon, I was thrilled to discover an empty space at the back of my house. However, my elation was short-lived as I overheard a heated argument. Suddenly, my grandfather's voice pierced through the commotion, prompting me to wonder who he was quarreling with. I soon discovered that he had cut down a tree that belonged to someone else, and the owner was furious and venting his anger towards my grandfather. Despite the harsh words, my grandfather remained calm and listened attentively. I have always admired his composure in such situations. Personally, I feel that the trees were obstructive due to their lush growth and almost touching my roof. It resulted in a dark and unpleasant room, which was remedied by my grandfather's decision to cut some of the trees. However, it is quite vexing that people only seem to talk about my grandfather. He did mention that it would be a financial loss, but the man continued to question him about his actions.
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