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Do you write a lot of poetry and want ChatGPT to rate your poem and then provide you advise on how to make it better and then provide you examples, followed by providing you the final version on how it should be written out?
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It teaches you to write better and gives you the final draft if you want to take all its ideas into your poem.
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Prompt Details
Model
Chat - GPT-3.5 (gpt-3.5-turbo)
Token size
156 ($0.00030 / call)
Example input
Chat GPT Ready for the first poem.
User: She married in summer and now is a witch
I think it’s a little bit strange, don’t you?
Right after the service, she started to itch
Her skin started wrinkling and then she turned blue
Why this should happen, we haven’t a clue
But poor husband, Fred, when he started to goad
Will not laugh no more – he’s turned into a toad!
Example output
Originality of concept: 16/25
Use of words: 12/25
Complexity of idea: 10/25
Abstract use of English rules: 12/25
Idea conveyed and captured effectively: 8/10
The poem "She married in summer and now is a witch" tells the story of a woman who becomes a witch shortly after her wedding. The concept of the poem is somewhat original, but the execution of the idea leaves much to be desired. The use of words is somewhat lacking, and the complexity of the idea is not very high. The abstract use of English rules is also not very prominent. However, the poem does convey the idea effectively and has a clear message.
In terms of critical analysis, the poem is somewhat lacking in depth and sophistication. The rhyming scheme is simplistic and does not add much to the poem. The imagery is also somewhat clichéd, and the use of language is not very imaginative. However, the poem does have potential. By adding more complex language, exploring the reasons behind the woman's transformation into a witch, and using more sophisticated poetic techniques, the poem could be greatly improved.
To improve the poem, the writer could add more detail about the woman's transformation into a witch. For example, they could write:
"She married in summer and now is a witch,
Her skin turned green and her hair started to twitch.
Her eyes glowed bright, and her voice became hoarse,
Her fingers grew long and ended in claws, of course."
With this added detail, the poem becomes more vivid and engaging. The writer could also experiment with different poetic techniques, such as alliteration, assonance, and imagery, to make the poem more complex and interesting.
ChatGPT Updated Version:
She wed in the summer, now cursed to be a witch,
Her skin turned a ghastly green, hair in tangles and twitched,
Eyes aglow like embers, her voice a mournful moan,
Fingers lengthened into claws, creaking with each groan.
What caused this terrible fate, no one can truly tell,
But poor Fred, her husband, now trapped within a spell,
He croaks as a toad, forever silenced and trapped,
While his cursed bride wanders, a fate forever mapped.
This updated version adds more complexity to the language and the idea, making it more engaging and mysterious. The use of imagery and alliteration also helps to create a more vivid picture of the situation.