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Prompt Details
Model
Chat - GPT-3.5 (gpt-3.5-turbo)
Token size
203 ($0.00040 / call)
Example input
ChatGPT: Ready for first Children's Book
User: One cold rainy day when my father was a little boy, he met an old alley cat on his street. The cat was very drippy and uncomfortable so my father said, “Wouldn’t you like to come home with me?”
This surprised the cat—she had never before met anyone who cared about old alley cats—but she said, “I’d be very much obliged if I could sit by a warm furnace, and perhaps have a saucer of milk.”
“We have a very nice furnace to sit by,” said my father, “and I’m sure my mother has an extra saucer of milk.”
My father and the cat became good friends but my father’s mother was very upset about the cat. She hated cats, particularly ugly old alley cats. “Elmer Elevator,” she said to my father, “if you think I’m going [11]to give that cat a saucer of milk, you’re very wrong. Once you start feeding stray alley cats you might as well expect to feed every stray in town, and I am not going to do it!”
This made my father very sad, and he apologized to the cat because his mother had been so rude. He told the cat to stay anyway, and that somehow he would bring her a saucer of milk each day. My father fed the cat for three weeks, but one day his mother found the cat’s saucer in the cellar and she was extremely angry. She whipped my father and threw the cat out the door, but later on my father sneaked out and found the cat. Together they went for a walk in the park and tried to think of nice things to talk about. My father said, “When I grow up I’m going to have an airplane. Wouldn’t it be wonderful to fly just anywhere you might think of!”
Example output
Originality of concept: 16/25 - The idea of a boy befriending a stray cat is a common theme in children's literature, but the story adds a twist with the mother's disapproval and the boy's determination to help the cat despite the obstacles.
Use of words: 20/25 - The language is appropriate for the target audience and the story flows well. There are a few longer and more complex sentences that may require some explanation for younger readers.
Complexity of idea: 18/25 - The idea of helping a stray cat is a simple one, but the added conflict with the mother's disapproval and the boy's determination to help the cat adds complexity to the story.
Abstract use of English rules: 22/25 - The story follows standard English grammar and syntax, with a few exceptions for stylistic purposes.
Idea conveyed and captured effectively: 9/10 - The story effectively conveys the message of compassion and determination in helping those in need, even in the face of obstacles.
Overall score: 85/100
The story effectively captures the theme of compassion and determination in helping those in need. The conflict between the boy and his mother adds a layer of complexity to the story, and the resolution with the boy sneaking out to find the cat is heartwarming. One way to improve the story would be to add more details about the cat's personality and backstory, as this would help the reader connect with the character on a deeper level. For example, the story could reveal that the cat was once someone's pet but was abandoned and left to fend for herself on the streets. This would add a layer of poignancy to the story and make the boy's determination to help the cat even more admirable.
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ChatGPT Updated Version:
One cold, rainy day, when my father was a young boy, he met a scruffy, old alley cat on his street. Despite her bedraggled appearance, the cat was friendly and affectionate, and my father felt sorry for her. "Wouldn't you like to come home with me?" he asked, hoping to offer her some comfort.
The cat was surprised by his kindness. No one had ever cared about her before, least of all a human. "I'd like that very much," she replied, "but I don't want to cause any trouble."
"Don't worry," said my father, "you're welcome in our home."
When they arrived at my father's house, his mother was less than pleased to see the cat. She despised cats, especially mangy, old strays. "Elmer Elevator," she scolded, "if you think I'm going to give that cat a saucer of milk, you're very wrong. Once you start feeding stray alley cats, you might as well expect to feed every stray in town, and I am not going to do it!"
My father was disappointed by his mother's lack of compassion, but he refused to give up on his new friend. He promised the cat that he would bring her a saucer of milk every day, even if it meant sneaking around behind his mother's back.
For three weeks, my father faithfully brought the cat her daily milk, but one day his mother discovered the saucer in the cellar. She was furious and threw the cat out of the house. My father was heartbroken, but he didn't give up on the cat. He snuck out of the house that night and found her waiting for him outside.
Together, they went for a walk in the park and talked about all the things they wished they could do. "When I grow up," my father said, "I'm going to have an airplane. Wouldn't it be wonderful to fly just anywhere you might think of?"
The cat purred in agreement, and they both fell into a comfortable silence, enjoying each other's company.
As they walked back home, my father realized that he wanted to help more animals like his new friend. He started volunteering at the local animal shelter and eventually became a veterinarian, dedicating his life to helping animals in need.
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Sequel idea:
In the sequel, my father could encounter other animals in need, such as a lost dog or an injured bird, and he would need to use his compassion and resourcefulness to help them. Along the way, he could also face challenges from people who don't understand the value of helping animals or who actively oppose it. Through these experiences, my father would learn more about himself and his own values, while also inspiring others to be kind to animals.