What the brief asked: a 150-word Shopify description for the Atlas Pro standing desk that mentions the 10-year motor warranty and uses no superlatives. Scorecard: | Criterion | Score | Evidence | |---|---|---| | Length compliance (150 words) | 0 | The output runs 231 words ("...and that is why the Atlas Pro belongs in your office.") | | Mandatory warranty mention | 0 | No mention of the warranty anywhere; closest line is "built to last for years" | | Superlative ban | 0 | "the ultimate standing desk" and "best-in-class stability" | | Audience fit (Shopify buyers) | 7 | "transforms how you work from morning to night" reads naturally for store visitors | | Accuracy | 6 | "whisper-quiet motor" is plausible but not in the brief's material | Claim check: "best-in-class stability" - unsupported. "whisper-quiet motor" - unsupported. No wrong claims. Top failure mode: missed constraints. Three hard rules were broken: length, warranty, superlatives. Verdict: REDO. Repairs, by impact: 1. Rewrite to 145-155 words and count them before submitting. 2. State the 10-year motor warranty explicitly in the second half. 3. Remove "ultimate" and "best-in-class" and any other superlatives. 4. Drop "whisper-quiet" unless the product spec confirms it.