Alder Street Bakery's second shop opened on 3 October at 14 Mill Lane. We're open 7am to 3pm, Tuesday to Sunday. At the first shop, the sourdough usually sells out by about 11am. There are six of us across both shops. [Add one specific detail about the bread or the new shop here. Your notes don't say what makes it special.] Come in and try the bread! - **Removed stock language:** Cut "Excited to announce," "in today's fast-paced world," "thrilled to unlock a whole new chapter," "game-changer," "It's not just a bakery, it's an experience," "elevate your mornings," and "dive into something special." - **Swapped vague claims for your facts:** Added the opening date, address, hours, the sourdough sell-out time, and the staff count. Removed "incredible, amazing bread" and left a bracketed placeholder for a specific detail, since none was provided. - **Tightened and toned down:** Cut the repeated "Our bread is truly amazing" line, reduced six exclamation marks to one, used no emoji, and mixed short and longer sentences.