CV Resume Coach - Present Yourself Better

Thank you for sharing a portion of your CV with me. From your text, it is evident that you have extensive experience in risk management, internal control assurance, and internal audit. It is also clear that you have been actively involved in QRM internal services mapping, assessing, implementing, and monitoring internal controls, particularly in confidentiality, privacy, and security. However, I noticed that your text could benefit from more specific details and quantifiable achievements to showcase your accomplishments in previous roles. Consider adding more information about the size of the companies or departments you have worked for, the scope of the projects you have managed, and the specific results that you have achieved. Additionally, it might be helpful to showcase your specific skills and qualifications that make you a strong candidate for this role. Mentioning specific certifications or advanced degrees, as well as any unique skills or experience, can help distinguish you from other candidates. Regarding consistency and confidence, your text appears to be consistent in terms of the tenses used and the general structure of your sentences. However, it would be useful to include stronger action verbs and descriptive adjectives to create a more engaging and impactful narrative. Also, try to use specific examples to illustrate your accomplishments and responsibilities. Finally, I would recommend avoiding using abbreviations or acronyms that are not commonly understood in the industry. It's better to spell out the full name of the company or certification, rather than using abbreviations that might not be familiar to the reader. Here is a possible rewritten version of your text, with some changes based on the feedback above: Company Name Risk Manager (2010 - Present) Over 15 years of experience in internal control assurance and internal audit, with a focus on confidentiality, privacy, and security Actively involved in QRM internal services mapping, assessing, implementing, and monitoring internal controls Coordinated governance and oversight projects to address global requirements, regulations, and clients, mitigating confidentiality, privacy, and security risks as part of the security organization of the firm Accomplishments - Successfully defined and addressed risks related to confidentiality, privacy, and security for multiple clients, resulting in improved compliance and risk mitigation - Designed and executed effective awareness campaigns, training, and continuous improvement programs to promote best practices in confidentiality, privacy, and security - Demonstrated expertise in compliance and monitoring, ensuring that all internal controls are in place and functioning effectively Responsibilities - Conducted regular internal control assessments to ensure the effectiveness of controls, identify gaps, and recommend improvements - Coordinated and led cross-functional teams to develop and implement policies, procedures, and controls to address confidentiality, privacy, and security risks - Maintained up-to-date knowledge of industry trends, regulatory requirements, and emerging risks, and provided guidance and recommendations to stakeholders I hope this feedback and rewritten version is helpful in improving your CV. Good luck with your job search!